Twice.
It wasn’t an easy decision, but they had to go, there was just no living with them any longer.
Sure, they were only two lines written for a short story, but they were my favorites. Previous to this editing pass, I thought that they “made” the character who they were attributed, but alas, when all was said and done they were just a little garish and didn’t say anything that I hadn’t already showed.
The good news is that I understand that they’ll be very happy and are now frolicking on a farm with a description that I held onto for a year that I wrote for a different story.
OK, almost two years.
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